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The Sound of Silence
Deafening is
the sound of silence
Echoing in
my mind like madness
Washing off
a smile of sadness
Hiding behind
a whitewash of blackness
Crying out
a lingering cadence
For you
To hear
my Opus Majus
To see
my broken canvas
Of love
Alas
You are gone
You have vanished
Took my heart
and my happiness
With you
Published 21st Apr 2024
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21st Apr 2024 4:56am
Loving the imagery you evoke here. Well written. I know this place you speak of well. Thank you for sharing
21st Apr 2024 5:22am
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22nd Apr 2024 3:31am
21st Apr 2024 11:25am
Dear S,
This makes me think why do we allow people to do this to us? Why isn’t there a rule against such emotional upheaval and why does love have to be so bi-polar? This poem has a great deal if significance to me. I enjoyed the meter and format. The writing is awesome. H🌷
This makes me think why do we allow people to do this to us? Why isn’t there a rule against such emotional upheaval and why does love have to be so bi-polar? This poem has a great deal if significance to me. I enjoyed the meter and format. The writing is awesome. H🌷
22nd Apr 2024 3:41am
21st Apr 2024 5:06pm
22nd Apr 2024 3:42am
21st Apr 2024 10:25pm
I felt something true easily spilled,a sincere confession, straight from the heart.
Stay safe and happy and thriving always
Stay safe and happy and thriving always
22nd Apr 2024 3:43am
poetry is about spilling... when there is a lot of spilling then it touches the heart ... thank you for touching my heart with your comment
22nd Apr 2024 3:39am
Sam I have a purpose now and it is clear I was placed in this person's path not for love and I believed but for womankind and their retribution, I will see it through to the end. great write...
22nd Apr 2024 3:45am
22nd Apr 2024 4:21am
there is no love loss dearest Sam on his end he only cares about sex and hookers who squeal when really he doesn't aim to please but humiliate.
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