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Warm summer's day
Outdoors with friends
Play tag, I'm it
Run through gardens
Cobblestone paths
Too young to sit
Carrying weight
Thrill of the chase
Trying my wit
Cut through the grass
Not watching where
Into black pit
Water above
Sunlight fading
Dark walls unlit
Glee to panic
Thrashing around
Life might acquit
Fear's encounter
My second time
Not yet close-knit
Breathing water
Not really
Choking a bit
Hands from heaven
Pull me out quick
Mom threw a fit
True punishment
Deep in my dreams
Never forget
Tagging with fear
Always on edge
Since I'm not it
Outdoors with friends
Play tag, I'm it
Run through gardens
Cobblestone paths
Too young to sit
Carrying weight
Thrill of the chase
Trying my wit
Cut through the grass
Not watching where
Into black pit
Water above
Sunlight fading
Dark walls unlit
Glee to panic
Thrashing around
Life might acquit
Fear's encounter
My second time
Not yet close-knit
Breathing water
Not really
Choking a bit
Hands from heaven
Pull me out quick
Mom threw a fit
True punishment
Deep in my dreams
Never forget
Tagging with fear
Always on edge
Since I'm not it
Published 19th Apr 2024
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19th Apr 2024 4:38am
hello Josiah I remember such a world but I was exiled I think for my recovery and safety my memories of a fateful day erased out of mercy... the powers that be would remind me they want me to rebel with the other outlaws...Lu has been pardoned I remember the conflict that day I focus on a the solitary voice of my Father Lu and the men I can here them but they take all of my attention if I focus on them... so it's better I don't...anyway that's what your write inspired...
