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18th Apr 2024 6:16pm
Good job at capturing the struggle to find new paths and parts to identity in life. Some things take time to heal. The burden of carrying on can be quite the struggle at times. Anyway, this is a good haiku. The execution of the syllables fit nice and snug, and the shift in direction is solid. Bravo! Thanks for sharing.
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23rd Apr 2024 11:39am
The more things change, the more they stay the same. It is not the external but rather the the internal that shapes your reality
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