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i cannot see (too well)
i cannot
see
too well,
each picture
of her,
each happy
remembrance
blocks
my vision
from seeing
everything
else.
see
too well,
each picture
of her,
each happy
remembrance
blocks
my vision
from seeing
everything
else.
Published 18th Apr 2024
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18th Apr 2024 6:45am
hello beautiful Wolf I know this is supposed to be a happy poem but it made me sad you forgot who she was behind the smile perhaps she genuinely smiled only for you that you couldn't see her sorrow...
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18th Apr 2024 5:38pm
Beauty and admiration can often outshine the rest of the picture, well writ.
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