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I don’t see the point in trying if nothings going to work. I can’t climb myself out of this hole when the walls keep breaking off with each attempt. And with each effort I only fall again with new injuries. Soon enough my whole body will break and have no strength to climb up again. My body is decaying and becoming a part of this dark, empty, nothingness. The walls are caving in and it’s raining. The rain cries for me and I’m drowning. I’m stuck and all I can do is wait for my last breath to come. The only comfort I have is the certainty of my demise.
Published 17th Apr 2024
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17th Apr 2024 10:50am
Sad, dark, morose and great! Your writing is fantastic. Take care of yourself.
17th Apr 2024 11:04am
You described exactly where I used to be. You did a great job conveying
the emotions or lack of. I clawed my way from below rock bottom, so I totally understand what
you were/ are feeling. Light will always follow dark.....don't give up hope 🖤
the emotions or lack of. I clawed my way from below rock bottom, so I totally understand what
you were/ are feeling. Light will always follow dark.....don't give up hope 🖤
17th Apr 2024 12:49pm
Love it..looking forward to the next journal entry.. and to see where this goes..excellent concept
17th Apr 2024 2:43pm
This is coming from a dark place, you’ve penned your feelings well. Don’t give up, hope will take you far.
17th Apr 2024 4:41pm
Good job at describing the suffocation and claustrophobia of the suffering you're going through. I like the metaphor of the walls you use, like you have no foundation or basis to get out of the place you're in. I feel like this at times as well, where you just want to give up. Anyway, as an expression of art, you capture hopelessness pretty well. Hope things can change for you. Take care.
17th Apr 2024 5:40pm
Even in darkness there is hope, even if you don’t recognize it right away.
I only say that because you wouldn’t be taking the time to write about it if there weren’t, you wouldn’t even bother.
Just my take because I’ve been here.
Sending you some comforting vibes.
I only say that because you wouldn’t be taking the time to write about it if there weren’t, you wouldn’t even bother.
Just my take because I’ve been here.
Sending you some comforting vibes.
