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Addicted
I'll accept the love filled cards
The chocolate and the gorgeous gifts
All dressed up in pretty wrap
lovely ribbons all hanging down
Kisses in the dead of night
The embraces oh so tight
But there's one thing you
Actually should know
I'm addicted to romance
And that's the way I roll
The chocolate and the gorgeous gifts
All dressed up in pretty wrap
lovely ribbons all hanging down
Kisses in the dead of night
The embraces oh so tight
But there's one thing you
Actually should know
I'm addicted to romance
And that's the way I roll
Published 9th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Just another one of my many addictions and a pic of some of the lovely irises in my garden!
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9th Apr 2024 12:10pm
9th Apr 2024 12:15pm
Thank you, my friend! It could have dire consequences should I fancy another woman's man! I thank you for your wonderful comment which is true with an exception here or there ..lol!
9th Apr 2024 12:26pm
9th Apr 2024 12:48pm
yes, romance is the way to go and afterwards its a whole new exciting story to live through:) a talented write as always, Faith
9th Apr 2024 6:54pm
9th Apr 2024 3:21pm
Amen sister!
Give me romance, not a pervert, lol.
Your writing is a breath of fresh air
Give me romance, not a pervert, lol.
Your writing is a breath of fresh air
9th Apr 2024 6:56pm
And you are a very sweet and talented lady! Thank you for reading and responding.
9th Apr 2024 4:25pm
9th Apr 2024 6:58pm
Oh, yessss! I agree wholeheartedly, but then you knew I would!
Have a great afternoon, Adagio!
Have a great afternoon, Adagio!
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9th Apr 2024 9:37pm
your charming poem is a delightful celebration of the joys of romance and your unapologetic embrace of your love for all things passionate and amorous. The playful, lighthearted tone and the use of vivid, evocative language create a truly captivating reading experience.
The overall tone of the poem is one of joyful, unabashed embrace of all things romantic and passionate. your command of language and imagery creates a truly immersive and delightful reading experience, inviting the reader to join in the celebration of the power and beauty of love.
The overall tone of the poem is one of joyful, unabashed embrace of all things romantic and passionate. your command of language and imagery creates a truly immersive and delightful reading experience, inviting the reader to join in the celebration of the power and beauty of love.
9th Apr 2024 10:23pm
Mohamed,
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. You made my heart smile and smile and smile! Thank you so much.
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. You made my heart smile and smile and smile! Thank you so much.
9th Apr 2024 11:58pm
We are addicted to romance. Treat the lady with Kindness and Respect and she will give you her world. Keep on writing my smart beautiful sexy woman.
10th Apr 2024 00:13am
10th Apr 2024 00:26am
10th Apr 2024 00:30am
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. I appreciate it very much!
10th Apr 2024 11:43am
