Voice of my Soul

your beautiful and evocative couplet poem portrays the ethereal nature of your soul and its ability to connect with others. you captures the transcendent and emotional power of the soul's voice, emphasizing its ability to touch and resonate with others.

thank you for those lovely words

"I called upon without wings it flew,
Its moans pierced the heavens true."

this is beautiful. Fia xoxo

It’s the moans … isn’t it?!

of course

Really great flow and tempo in this. The rhymes help make it smooth. To me, the last line comes up unexpectedly and adds a good dissonance to it.

Well done.

Thank you. What does dissonance mean?! I’m terrible with words especially poetry

It's kind of like a discord of previous thoughts. Something unexpected.

Thank you for the explanation… well I guess I tend to write things unexpectedly … sorry if I discorded you

haha, no, your discord is a nice surprise that made the end satisfactory.

thank you for touching my heart with your comment

Connecting with others is where it's at.That"s what I'm all about. Brilliant piece of poetry! I applaud you!

coming from you... that's is all I need

That is a gift to me and I thank you!

You have a powerful spirit, from this fine translation i can tell that you aim higher, you look into the future with strong resolution
and verve..Its fine translation and you succeeded to keep the syllable with the same count..and rhyme as well.
Stay safe and always thriving, God bless

Thank you my friend … your insight means a lot to me. I appreciate it. I hope it is to your approval