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Voice of my Soul
Voice of my soul to other souls fly
Touched by many hearts in the sky
I called upon without wings it flew,
Its moans pierced the heavens true.
Made of dust, but heaven its tongue.
Tears of passion shed, a divine sung.
It flew in the sky for all to behold
Until my wail stirred the upper world.
Touched by many hearts in the sky
I called upon without wings it flew,
Its moans pierced the heavens true.
Made of dust, but heaven its tongue.
Tears of passion shed, a divine sung.
It flew in the sky for all to behold
Until my wail stirred the upper world.
Published 6th Apr 2024
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6th Apr 2024 9:20pm
your beautiful and evocative couplet poem portrays the ethereal nature of your soul and its ability to connect with others. you captures the transcendent and emotional power of the soul's voice, emphasizing its ability to touch and resonate with others.
6th Apr 2024 9:23pm
6th Apr 2024 10:53pm
"I called upon without wings it flew,
Its moans pierced the heavens true."
this is beautiful. Fia xoxo
Its moans pierced the heavens true."
this is beautiful. Fia xoxo
6th Apr 2024 11:32pm
7th Apr 2024 00:00am
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7th Apr 2024 00:18am
Thank you. What does dissonance mean?! I’m terrible with words especially poetry
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7th Apr 2024 00:24am
Thank you for the explanation… well I guess I tend to write things unexpectedly … sorry if I discorded you
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7th Apr 2024 3:24am
Connecting with others is where it's at.That"s what I'm all about. Brilliant piece of poetry! I applaud you!
7th Apr 2024 5:52pm
7th Apr 2024 11:41pm
24th Apr 2024 00:12am
You have a powerful spirit, from this fine translation i can tell that you aim higher, you look into the future with strong resolution
and verve..Its fine translation and you succeeded to keep the syllable with the same count..and rhyme as well.
Stay safe and always thriving, God bless
and verve..Its fine translation and you succeeded to keep the syllable with the same count..and rhyme as well.
Stay safe and always thriving, God bless
24th Apr 2024 00:22am
Thank you my friend … your insight means a lot to me. I appreciate it. I hope it is to your approval
