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Rage
I looked trouble
In the eye
Acted swiftly
To deal with it
But I'm skeptical
Of people now
Am I angry?
No, this is
Closer to rage
At how the
World is so full
Of hatred
Rude people
The ungrateful ones
Who try to make
You miserable
At every opportunity
Why can't you and I
Disagree and
Still be pleasant
Toward each other
So many lost souls
Demanding to
Be heard
In the eye
Acted swiftly
To deal with it
But I'm skeptical
Of people now
Am I angry?
No, this is
Closer to rage
At how the
World is so full
Of hatred
Rude people
The ungrateful ones
Who try to make
You miserable
At every opportunity
Why can't you and I
Disagree and
Still be pleasant
Toward each other
So many lost souls
Demanding to
Be heard
Published 5th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Whatever happened to the Golden Rule?
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5th Apr 2024 1:53pm
5th Apr 2024 2:06pm
5th Apr 2024 2:08pm
Greetings Faith;
How are you doing... wanted to let know that liked this write,, very much... Why do peoples heart grow colder instead of the mind gettin wiser as they get older, I know not, I can only theorize... Take good care mine friend: deadwolf
How are you doing... wanted to let know that liked this write,, very much... Why do peoples heart grow colder instead of the mind gettin wiser as they get older, I know not, I can only theorize... Take good care mine friend: deadwolf
5th Apr 2024 5:33pm
Thank you, Deadwolf! It is nice to hear from you. I appreciate your wonderful response to my poem. Have a great afternoon, my friend!
5th Apr 2024 5:35pm
The world has lost the will to think for one's self. Parents have lost control of their homes and the predators walk the streets.TV is a waste of time and the cell phone rules daily lives.
5th Apr 2024 5:37pm
5th Apr 2024 10:00pm
Your poignant and introspective ink that delves into the emotions stirred up by the world's negativity and the struggle to maintain optimism in the face of constant conflict. You are expressing your frustration with the spread of hatred, rudeness and ingratitude in society. Your final lines underscore the longing for understanding and compassion in a world where so many voices demand to be heard. Honest writing
6th Apr 2024 11:07am
6th Apr 2024 10:06am
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