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When Tomorrow Comes

Mascara dripping
A scintilla-frozen dream.
Before comes the pale.  
adagio
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Re. When Tomorrow Comes
4th Apr 2024 7:40pm
Three lines and picture speaks volumes. Hugs and love, Oral
TheOralizer
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Re: Re. When Tomorrow Comes
4th Apr 2024 7:42pm
You speak kind words. I am testing the waters.
adagio
Re. When Tomorrow Comes
(Debbie)
4th Apr 2024 8:46pm
Picture is so cool for your haiku.
I love your post.
deliabear
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Re: Re. When Tomorrow Comes
4th Apr 2024 8:47pm
Haiku is different. It makes one think. I appreciate your suggestion, my friend.  
adagio
Re. When Tomorrow Comes
4th Apr 2024 9:40pm
Test a way....dare do I see a little sparkle here?
mysteriouslady
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Re. When Tomorrow Comes
4th Apr 2024 9:42pm
Sparkling in deep Haiku. Sounds like a song.  
adagio
Re. When Tomorrow Comes
(IDryad)
4th Apr 2024 10:17pm
👍good read, Adagio
Grace
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Re. When Tomorrow Comes
4th Apr 2024 10:18pm
Hey there! Thank you, my friend.
adagio

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