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PCP (Pathetic Comatose People)
Rats chewed the hands, lips and nose off a four month old baby in a fleabag apartment building across the street from me. The mother was on Angel Dust. She had her head in the oven trying to kill herself. I asked her if she needed assistance. She said no. I helped her anyway.
People are so pathetic!
People are so pathetic!
Published 4th Apr 2024
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4th Apr 2024 7:18pm
4th Apr 2024 7:22pm
5th Apr 2024 11:25am
This was written in such way that it heightens one's senses in its visceral raw style. It's cool that it strikes nerves, good stories always do, and you add a genuine realness that lends toward sparking vivid imaginations. This is good writing.
5th Apr 2024 11:27am
Striking many nerves as of late. Not holding back anymore. Thank you Thor for the read, the detailed review and the support.
8th Apr 2024 5:19pm
I agree with Thor; this potentially evokes strong and gut-wrenching emotions in your audience but it is, quite shockingly to out-of-touch folks, a reality in parts of the world. Knowledge is power. My cousin was literally slaughtered and thrown into a garbage bag by her boyfriend- he was on PCP among other things.
8th Apr 2024 9:31pm
Goddamn that's brutal. At times reality is raw and honest. You may not like it but it's the truth. Thank you for your comments my friend.
