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Deepest Cuts
Abrasions..small flesh tear
Lacerations..some blood will be exposed
Punctures..enough blood to cause a scare
Avulsions..maybe some body parts disposed
Lies..small factors creating distrust
Secrets..hiding the guilt inside
Dishonesty..on the verge of full on lust
Betrayal..life altering heart and soul have died
Lacerations..some blood will be exposed
Punctures..enough blood to cause a scare
Avulsions..maybe some body parts disposed
Lies..small factors creating distrust
Secrets..hiding the guilt inside
Dishonesty..on the verge of full on lust
Betrayal..life altering heart and soul have died
Published 3rd Apr 2024
| Edited 16th Nov 2024
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3rd Apr 2024 5:19am
3rd Apr 2024 9:56am
Thank you..I appreciate the concern..I fortunately have found my soul mate (25 years and counting) and we are are doing great..everything is good..I am sorry you have had to deal with betrayal..difficult experiences in life we all learn from I believe
3rd Apr 2024 7:35am
This read like a thick dark velveteen curtain rising then falling again, Here the dark is felt at its core being
3rd Apr 2024 9:59am
Thank you..was trying something different..I appreciate your response..had a quick brainstorm while laying in bed and wanted to put this together before I went to sleep last night and the thoughts all vanished by morning
3rd Apr 2024 1:20pm
I like the list-style you’ve penned this with. It really catalogues all of these various ways one may be most deeply cut, very clever.
Thank you for the kind words..I appreciate your feedback..feedback like this motivates me to keep exploring new concepts and ideas
12th Apr 2024 4:39pm
Hello Mstrmnd1923, very interesting write an idea... Take good care: deadwolf
12th Apr 2024 6:18pm
