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Rain
The rain
comes down
Like pellets
As blue as
The pain in
My heart
I am nothing
If not
Your prisoner
Longing to be
Set free
comes down
Like pellets
As blue as
The pain in
My heart
I am nothing
If not
Your prisoner
Longing to be
Set free
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Re. Rain
22nd Mar 2024 8:11pm
The rain or rainy weather has all types of effects on humans mentally and emotionally. One person can get sleepy, while another feels crazy horny. One person feels all alone in the world and another feels the world is overcrowded. Tight write lady
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Re: Re. Rain
22nd Mar 2024 9:23pm
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback. It is truly appreciated! Have a great night.
Re. Rain
22nd Mar 2024 9:25pm
The next step to freedom is to say YES to the wonderful and miracle of YOU.. YOU are WOW!! An original not a copy. Hugs and love, Oral
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23rd Mar 2024 9:34pm
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23rd Mar 2024 6:16pm
Rain doesn't last forever, the sun will eventually shine....and when it does, it will create a magnificent burn..
I love how you gave pain... color xo
I love how you gave pain... color xo
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Re. Rain
24th Mar 2024 9:38am
Hoi hoi
Love your write, love the artwork.
This is storytelling!
Glad you’re back.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus;
Love your write, love the artwork.
This is storytelling!
Glad you’re back.
Thank you.
Kind regards, Gus;
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26th Mar 2024 7:21pm
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26th Mar 2024 7:23pm
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25th Mar 2024 9:18pm
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26th Mar 2024 7:25pm
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26th Mar 2024 5:26pm
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26th Mar 2024 7:27pm
Re. Rain
26th Mar 2024 7:51pm
your pen captures the essence of melancholy and longing in a concise and evocative manner. your final lines convey a deep sense of yearning and vulnerability, expressing the desire to break free from a sense of captivity. It's a poignant and relatable portrayal of emotional longing and the longing for liberation.
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Re: Re. Rain
26th Mar 2024 7:54pm
Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. It's very much appreciated!
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26th Mar 2024 7:57pm
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26th Mar 2024 8:01pm
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27th Mar 2024 10:48am
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27th Mar 2024 10:57am
Re. Rain
29th Mar 2024 10:45pm
Made me think of the idiom, ....struggling to keep your head above water.
Let me hand you a raincoat and an umbrella.
Let me hand you a raincoat and an umbrella.
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Re: Re. Rain
29th Mar 2024 10:57pm
Well, I was thinking of that while I was writing this. You are very perceptive. Thanks for your wonderful comment.
P.S. Thanks for the raincoat and umbrella. ☔ 🌧️
P.S. Thanks for the raincoat and umbrella. ☔ 🌧️