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A Pretty Box
I made a little pretty box
to keep precious things within.
I've named it, of course, Fort Knox
It's hid among my pants and socks
until I bring it out again...
A hand-made box for precious things
I put my whole heart into it
and when I'm out to dance and sing
wine and dine and have fling
my heart is safe, within it.
to keep precious things within.
I've named it, of course, Fort Knox
It's hid among my pants and socks
until I bring it out again...
A hand-made box for precious things
I put my whole heart into it
and when I'm out to dance and sing
wine and dine and have fling
my heart is safe, within it.
Published 21st Mar 2024
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21st Mar 2024 9:59am
Dear R,
I enjoyed this poem. Very sweet write and the idea of preserving our hearts for safe keeping in a pretty box hidden among our under things is a fabulous piece of imagery. I wish you the best for this comp. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed this poem. Very sweet write and the idea of preserving our hearts for safe keeping in a pretty box hidden among our under things is a fabulous piece of imagery. I wish you the best for this comp. Lovely write. H🌷
21st Mar 2024 4:42pm
21st Mar 2024 1:42pm
It could be a box of your own desires, wishes and thoughts....never-ending in an array of a box that you can never fill and always admire.
I like the concept...
I like the concept...
21st Mar 2024 4:45pm
Hi Tralfazz and welcome
to our little corner of the
uni verse thanks the visit
and your lovely comment.
to our little corner of the
uni verse thanks the visit
and your lovely comment.
