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Grief Lives After We Die
As I die
mortals watch the day
crying for eternity
embrace your hand in mine
daylight torn
pity the sadness
no forgiveness
forever be
burning me
mortals watch the day
crying for eternity
embrace your hand in mine
daylight torn
pity the sadness
no forgiveness
forever be
burning me
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Re. Grief Lives After We Die
19th Mar 2024 7:20pm
Re: Re. Grief Lives After We Die
19th Mar 2024 7:54pm
Re. Grief Lives After We Die
19th Mar 2024 8:09pm
Based on what I see everyday with my mom grieving, grief never ever
truly dies.
I like this one alot.
truly dies.
I like this one alot.
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Re: Re. Grief Lives After We Die
19th Mar 2024 9:23pm
Thanks for adding your experience to the relation of this poem. It means a lot. Thanks Debbie.
Re. Grief Lives After We Die
19th Mar 2024 9:07pm
Grief for loved ones is eternal as long as you breathe. In effect the dearly departed live on daily providing wisdom even in dust …
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Re: Re. Grief Lives After We Die
19th Mar 2024 9:24pm
That's a good point. wisdom is infinite. Even after life.
Thanks for the feedback and comments.
Thanks for the feedback and comments.
Re. Grief Lives After We Die
20th Mar 2024 2:07am
Re: Re. Grief Lives After We Die
Good Morning Crimsin,
Thanks for your comments and adding this poem to your reading list. Appreciate it.
Thanks for your comments and adding this poem to your reading list. Appreciate it.
Re. Grief Lives After We Die
20th Mar 2024 4:47am
Dear V,
Such a thoughtful piece. Had me thinking about those I’ve lost and the holes they’ve left. Grief seems perpetual no matter how jovial we can be loss hurts forever doesn’t it. Wonderful write on a such a delicate subject. H🌷
Such a thoughtful piece. Had me thinking about those I’ve lost and the holes they’ve left. Grief seems perpetual no matter how jovial we can be loss hurts forever doesn’t it. Wonderful write on a such a delicate subject. H🌷
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Re: Re. Grief Lives After We Die
20th Mar 2024 8:47am
Hello Honoria,
Thank you for your wonderful comments and feedback. Your words inspire!!
Thank you for your wonderful comments and feedback. Your words inspire!!