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Re. (do you think of me with the lights on)
19th Mar 2024 6:05pm
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19th Mar 2024 7:07pm
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20th Mar 2024 00:58am
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20th Apr 2024 1:46am
Thank you, love.
I'm in a cutting phase.
Figuratively.
Cutting shit just to watch the ichor ooze out...
I'm in a cutting phase.
Figuratively.
Cutting shit just to watch the ichor ooze out...
Re. (do you think of me with the lights on)
20th Mar 2024 5:00am
Dear B,
Oh dear. This one really put the hooks in didn’t he? I like the play between light (lights on) and dark (eyes closed). It’s a mournful poem for me having experienced something similar. And that’s what makes this so brilliant, your capacity to relate to your reader on every visceral level. H🌷
Oh dear. This one really put the hooks in didn’t he? I like the play between light (lights on) and dark (eyes closed). It’s a mournful poem for me having experienced something similar. And that’s what makes this so brilliant, your capacity to relate to your reader on every visceral level. H🌷
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20th Apr 2024 1:46am
I LOVE IT WHEN YOU SEE THE PLAYS ON WORDS.
The fact that you SEE the shit, it tickles the fuck out of me, Hon.
I love you girl. And I appreciate you.
The fact that you SEE the shit, it tickles the fuck out of me, Hon.
I love you girl. And I appreciate you.
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20th Mar 2024 11:26am
I swear to
Gawd…
It’s like looking in the mirror with you. You just say it SO MUCH BETTER.
Phenomenal woman, I keep telling you…
Gawd…
It’s like looking in the mirror with you. You just say it SO MUCH BETTER.
Phenomenal woman, I keep telling you…
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Re: Re. (do you think of me with the lights on)
20th Apr 2024 1:47am
Hey twin.
The heart wants what it wants... but the pussy is a fickle whore.
Just sayin.
Kisses.
The heart wants what it wants... but the pussy is a fickle whore.
Just sayin.
Kisses.
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20th Mar 2024 9:24pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:48am
Please. I'm fucking fabulous.
It absolutely doesn't matter.
You think of me either way.
It absolutely doesn't matter.
You think of me either way.
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21st Mar 2024 8:32pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:49am
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21st Apr 2024 9:16pm
Fukin - A man, very right on... dig your write... Mayhaps some more tequila would help... as I sit here, drinkin, & readin your work... : deadwolf
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21st Apr 2024 10:59pm
Thanks DW. 'Preciate it.
Be careful. My work vacillates between being really stabby, really angsty and really fuck-y. You may feel the urge to jack off while stabbing your mailman and crying over the new Taylor Swift album.
This is a normal response to me.
Be careful. My work vacillates between being really stabby, really angsty and really fuck-y. You may feel the urge to jack off while stabbing your mailman and crying over the new Taylor Swift album.
This is a normal response to me.
Re. (do you think of me with the lights on)
21st Apr 2024 11:44pm
Like that itch you can't scratch. But in this case, more like a tingle in the loins that is ever so present, and only one was able to quench it. You try to find a replacement.....! But Original is on-brand.
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21st Apr 2024 11:47pm
Yeah, there's no off-brand for the good shit.
Listen, you get a loins-tingle and you get that shit checked out or you'll be pissing green flames. I'm just sayin.
Hey DaVinci... thanks man. There's really nothing better than the original... and that's really hard some days.
Listen, you get a loins-tingle and you get that shit checked out or you'll be pissing green flames. I'm just sayin.
Hey DaVinci... thanks man. There's really nothing better than the original... and that's really hard some days.