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When.....
When was the last time
I smothered my face in your private place?
The last time I felt your fingers velvet rope my dreads
As I gave you head ?
Did my tongue script your body a novel?
Licked you Harlequin Romance style
Watch you squirm and grovel incoherent prayers to an un-seen god?
Yes, my darling..it's been a while
Since I've spread your thighs and traversed the Nile of you
The wile of you reciprocated
Sucking down such raw succulence
Imbibing lucid sustenance
So I say this
Sans extravagance of ego {for now}
Humbly...I need you to faucet my Eros a mouthful, baby..give it to me
A mountainous avalanche flooded with slickened memorabilia
To simply remind me once again
Of that tumbling Us
Stumbling down that familiar Rabbit hole
I smothered my face in your private place?
The last time I felt your fingers velvet rope my dreads
As I gave you head ?
Did my tongue script your body a novel?
Licked you Harlequin Romance style
Watch you squirm and grovel incoherent prayers to an un-seen god?
Yes, my darling..it's been a while
Since I've spread your thighs and traversed the Nile of you
The wile of you reciprocated
Sucking down such raw succulence
Imbibing lucid sustenance
So I say this
Sans extravagance of ego {for now}
Humbly...I need you to faucet my Eros a mouthful, baby..give it to me
A mountainous avalanche flooded with slickened memorabilia
To simply remind me once again
Of that tumbling Us
Stumbling down that familiar Rabbit hole
Published 17th Mar 2024
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17th Mar 2024 6:00am
Shit now Naajir! I don't know if me being MIA for years, not reading erotica on here, or you trying to prove a point with the 'tip' of your pen, but whatever it is has me uh....warm!
17th Mar 2024 9:24am
17th Mar 2024 11:21am
Picture and mention of dreadlocks had me imagining the words being sung by a Bob Marley. Could sum up the action as 'Rasta man, tasty Ma',m."
17th Mar 2024 1:40pm
You're seriously the master of erotica, Naaj
Did my tongue script your body a novel? > too many yummy lines to quote, but this one blew me off my feet.
Amazing flow as always, it just rolls of your (longing) tongue.
Did my tongue script your body a novel? > too many yummy lines to quote, but this one blew me off my feet.
Amazing flow as always, it just rolls of your (longing) tongue.
17th Mar 2024 3:16pm
Squirm-worthy & then some...this is. As Duende said...too many great lines to pin down here
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17th Mar 2024 5:30pm
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