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The little girl within me...
Sometimes I feel like I am just a lost little girl
in a fucked up world.
My mind is so cluddered,
you'd think I'm a hoarder.
I'm an over thinker,
I guess you would blame it on
posttraumatic stress disorder.
Under the assumption that
she just wanted attention,
you decided to ignore her.
You failed to realize that somebody,
somewhere would fucking adore her!
in a fucked up world.
My mind is so cluddered,
you'd think I'm a hoarder.
I'm an over thinker,
I guess you would blame it on
posttraumatic stress disorder.
Under the assumption that
she just wanted attention,
you decided to ignore her.
You failed to realize that somebody,
somewhere would fucking adore her!
Published 17th Mar 2024
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17th Mar 2024 7:16am
Dear M,
Loved the comparison of mind clutter and hoarding. So true and that image is brilliant. The closing lines are stellar. Put quite the twist for an uplifting ending. Great write. H🌷
Loved the comparison of mind clutter and hoarding. So true and that image is brilliant. The closing lines are stellar. Put quite the twist for an uplifting ending. Great write. H🌷
18th Mar 2024 6:53pm
Hi Meganne,
I adore you!
Sounds like you need to release some (more) tension!
I adore you!
Sounds like you need to release some (more) tension!
8th Aug 2024 4:34am
