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Forests of Twilight
In blackened dreams
a mist descends from the hills
Unsuspecting
Only the dust moves,
like a funeral veil of melancholy
Sorrow
The traveler of unknown plains
through darkness & light
Confused
Flowers of desirable bloom
Lethal in touch and smell
Death
a mist descends from the hills
Unsuspecting
Only the dust moves,
like a funeral veil of melancholy
Sorrow
The traveler of unknown plains
through darkness & light
Confused
Flowers of desirable bloom
Lethal in touch and smell
Death
Published 15th Mar 2024
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15th Mar 2024 10:10am
This might be my favorite poem of yours.
It's written exquisitely
Super great poem
It's written exquisitely
Super great poem
15th Mar 2024 10:19am
Awesome! Glad you enjoyed this poem. Tried something a bit different.
15th Mar 2024 10:10am
15th Mar 2024 10:20am
Thank you LDF. Appreciate that you added it to your reading list. Many thanks!
15th Mar 2024 10:34am
This is genuinely great. Once in a while one hits and I say "damn, I wish I wrote that", this is one of those.
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