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that flower (shed its skin)
not
as young
and naive
as the
year before,
eyes
watching
around himself,
possessions
tucked away,
don't
stand
too close,
i will not
be responsible.
as young
and naive
as the
year before,
eyes
watching
around himself,
possessions
tucked away,
don't
stand
too close,
i will not
be responsible.
Published 14th Mar 2024
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15th Mar 2024 3:44am
Dear J,
I have great appreciation for standing one’s ground and not taking undue responsibility. This feels an ominous write and I like it. H🌷
I have great appreciation for standing one’s ground and not taking undue responsibility. This feels an ominous write and I like it. H🌷
15th Mar 2024 5:52am
Anonymous
16th Mar 2024 2:47pm
What a brilliant ending!
16th Mar 2024 6:50pm
I agree with Honoria. There is something ominous lurking within this one, the sense of having been burned, scammed, in some way taken advantage of and the resolve to not let it happen again. Yup yup yup. Flower as snake.
17th Mar 2024 4:32am
