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GOOD TO THE LAST DROP
SAVORING
it as long as
I could,
BUT
the more I sucked
the quicker it
was diminishing.
I paused for a moment
but the taste quickly
drew me back.
OH
no, please no!
The last drop of my
milkshake was gone;
it was good to the
last drop...thankful
for a few minutes the
taste remains.
it as long as
I could,
BUT
the more I sucked
the quicker it
was diminishing.
I paused for a moment
but the taste quickly
drew me back.
OH
no, please no!
The last drop of my
milkshake was gone;
it was good to the
last drop...thankful
for a few minutes the
taste remains.
Published 14th Mar 2024
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14th Mar 2024 1:33pm
When you have something good, it is great to that last drop. Great poem!!
14th Mar 2024 1:42pm
So true. Thanks for the comment. Have a great UP and write day. Hugs and love, Oral
