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Behind Yinsel
just let go
all the pain in you
watch the blood
flow like a flood
the festive tints
over bloody footprints
circles of red
be careful where you tread
no more feeling
little actual healing
this invisible entity
has hit the limit of eternity
red alert
it's a dead cert
i think of death
with each breath
all the pain in you
watch the blood
flow like a flood
the festive tints
over bloody footprints
circles of red
be careful where you tread
no more feeling
little actual healing
this invisible entity
has hit the limit of eternity
red alert
it's a dead cert
i think of death
with each breath
Published 10th Mar 2024
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10th Mar 2024 3:39pm
10th Mar 2024 4:42pm
10th Mar 2024 6:10pm
Brilliant!
I could feel the pain dissipate as blood flows.
Death-the only sure thing in life.
(I want to ‘Like’ and ‘Unlike’ this reminder)
🙏
I could feel the pain dissipate as blood flows.
Death-the only sure thing in life.
(I want to ‘Like’ and ‘Unlike’ this reminder)
🙏
10th Mar 2024 7:01pm
sometimes these kind of poems hit nerves
but for me this is a purge
was sectioned before xmas and sfter for teying to end it
both raised toxicity levels above 100 in my liver
both times on a drip of antibiotic
for 20 hrs
but for me this is a purge
was sectioned before xmas and sfter for teying to end it
both raised toxicity levels above 100 in my liver
both times on a drip of antibiotic
for 20 hrs
10th Mar 2024 8:14pm
I am overwhelmed by your poetic purging return, my dear dear friend.
There's such powerful emotive force by your minimalism that aches with every raw honest line. The heft of humanity and our dark spaces, beautifully highlighted by your writer's torch.... 🔦
So fucking great to see you, C
RL added for sure.
🌹💙 💙 💙
There's such powerful emotive force by your minimalism that aches with every raw honest line. The heft of humanity and our dark spaces, beautifully highlighted by your writer's torch.... 🔦
So fucking great to see you, C
RL added for sure.
🌹💙 💙 💙
