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Murder Scene
One day I'll find my inner thoughts,
There.--Spread upon my floor,
A scene of macabre for everyone to see.
The stains so deep.
A crime of passion, There,
Upon my floor.
So honey,
You better stay away from me.
There.--Spread upon my floor,
A scene of macabre for everyone to see.
The stains so deep.
A crime of passion, There,
Upon my floor.
So honey,
You better stay away from me.
Published 19th Feb 2010
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19th Feb 2010 11:47pm
I like this one, although the grammatical errors are a bit of a put of.
If you change the title and add and R in murder, and fix the other spelling mistake it will be a good poem.
If you change the title and add and R in murder, and fix the other spelling mistake it will be a good poem.
20th Feb 2010 3:09am
Ahh--That has to be an epic fail.
I quickly wrote this onto the site, from a notebook. My typing skills are horrid. I'll fix it right away.
I quickly wrote this onto the site, from a notebook. My typing skills are horrid. I'll fix it right away.
