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Stirring Crap
Erotic hedonist,
Remembering drama,
Through being nosey,
Gets a whiff.
Bodily functions,
In sensual lust,
Allude deception,
Subjecting confusion.
Snuffing ferment,
Disposable waste,
Whilst cleansing,
Healthy guts?
Twisted indulgence,
Never resisting,
Escaping extremity,
Perverted wonder.
Downward spiral,
Literal morality,
Mindfully exempt,
Ignorant bliss.
Semblant visage,
Crooked smile,
Chance plays,
Flushing away.
Head in toilet,
Dwarfing aesthetics,
Vacuous gravity,
Stirring crap.
Sickening wickedness,
Enough fills,
To the surface,
Gross disgust.
Remembering drama,
Through being nosey,
Gets a whiff.
Bodily functions,
In sensual lust,
Allude deception,
Subjecting confusion.
Snuffing ferment,
Disposable waste,
Whilst cleansing,
Healthy guts?
Twisted indulgence,
Never resisting,
Escaping extremity,
Perverted wonder.
Downward spiral,
Literal morality,
Mindfully exempt,
Ignorant bliss.
Semblant visage,
Crooked smile,
Chance plays,
Flushing away.
Head in toilet,
Dwarfing aesthetics,
Vacuous gravity,
Stirring crap.
Sickening wickedness,
Enough fills,
To the surface,
Gross disgust.
Published 5th Mar 2024
Author's Note
A metaphorical allegory, involving what happens to the spirit of someone giving into the temptation of drama and sexual immorality.
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5th Mar 2024 11:57pm
Good Evening,
What a whirlwind of metaphor's and depth involving this poem. So strong in delivery & presentation. Bravo in description and the selection of words to explain your theme.
What a whirlwind of metaphor's and depth involving this poem. So strong in delivery & presentation. Bravo in description and the selection of words to explain your theme.
6th Mar 2024 3:41am
Hey, thanks for checking it out. The critique is appreciated. I was really going for how ugly such things can be. It really is like flushing your head down the toilet and sucking it all up - the involvement of drama, as a whole. What a better way to get the point across than using such visuals, heh. Anyway, again, thanks for your input. I'll see you around!
