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forbidden fruit
she is my
forbidden fruit,
i want to
pick her,
take her home,
peel away
her protective
layering,
taste her,
and swallow.
forbidden fruit,
i want to
pick her,
take her home,
peel away
her protective
layering,
taste her,
and swallow.
Published 2nd Mar 2024
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2nd Mar 2024 9:57am
An eye opener to me as to how a desirable woman can be compared to a fruit.
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4th Mar 2024 7:15pm
There's an intimacy woven into these words that goes far deeper than the few beautiful lines they're expressed in...
4th Mar 2024 8:40pm
