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After
Intense fire
fuels the spirit
begging of you
do not fear it
Rejuvenated
burning bright
in the darkness
affording light
Urging passion
feeding the soul
elixir of life
sensation whole
This wild heart
untamed and free
without caution
loving deeply
Not conditioned
to conform
meant to dance
amid the storm
fuels the spirit
begging of you
do not fear it
Rejuvenated
burning bright
in the darkness
affording light
Urging passion
feeding the soul
elixir of life
sensation whole
This wild heart
untamed and free
without caution
loving deeply
Not conditioned
to conform
meant to dance
amid the storm
Published 1st Mar 2024
Author's Note
Outside of addiction, there is a freedom.
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1st Mar 2024 4:45pm
I’ve been reading your work today and I’ve been blown away by your journey. Your eloquence and grace speaks volumes.
There’s so much I would like to say, but I will leave it at I couldn’t be happier for you that you have found freedom.
There’s so much I would like to say, but I will leave it at I couldn’t be happier for you that you have found freedom.
1st Mar 2024 5:09pm
Dear Her,
Thank you. Yes, the journey has been trying and rewarding. I have never taken the straightest or easiest route. However, the lessons learned along the way are priceless. I am grateful for your kind words and appreciate your support:) The RL is an honour.
Bless
Mel
Thank you. Yes, the journey has been trying and rewarding. I have never taken the straightest or easiest route. However, the lessons learned along the way are priceless. I am grateful for your kind words and appreciate your support:) The RL is an honour.
Bless
Mel
1st Mar 2024 7:06pm
I have to agree with her, a flower can grow and bloom out from the darkest of places. A lovely powerful poem indeed.
5th Mar 2024 5:02pm
Dear Thor,
Thank you for your kind feedback and taking the time to read. Darkness is beautiful, all the other senses come in to play more acutely:)
Bless
Mel
Thank you for your kind feedback and taking the time to read. Darkness is beautiful, all the other senses come in to play more acutely:)
Bless
Mel
3rd Mar 2024 11:32pm
The winds of freedom are powerful and honored in this great poem. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and love, Oral
5th Mar 2024 5:04pm
Hiya Oral,
Thanks for the gracious comment:) yes freedom...not meant to be a sheep.
Bless
Mel
Thanks for the gracious comment:) yes freedom...not meant to be a sheep.
Bless
Mel
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7th Mar 2024 6:04am
Dear M,
I found this write so liberating. The message so powerful and wonderfully presented with the meter and rhyming! I only wish I could rhyme in such a mature manner. The closing stanza brought such a sense of freedom, so well written. H🌷
I found this write so liberating. The message so powerful and wonderfully presented with the meter and rhyming! I only wish I could rhyme in such a mature manner. The closing stanza brought such a sense of freedom, so well written. H🌷
12th Mar 2024 2:35pm
Dear H,
Thank you my lovely friend. My writing is a bit like a rollercoaster... lol. One day dark and one day light. I am grateful for your feedback.
Bless
Mel
Thank you my lovely friend. My writing is a bit like a rollercoaster... lol. One day dark and one day light. I am grateful for your feedback.
Bless
Mel
