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Fiefdom of Evergreen-with Adagio
In nature's fiefdom of evergreen
dancing in shadows embraced
with the pulse and heartbeats
through woven verse
of patchwork butterflies
as twilight's bohemians
from flower to petal
Bohemian sky in sepia
collections of flowers on hair
dreams of the walk to San Francisco
where there’ll be lots of loving there
warm rays dance upon the water
graffiti of flowers on yellow vans
mountains majestic peaks reaching high
dancing in shadows embraced
with the pulse and heartbeats
through woven verse
of patchwork butterflies
as twilight's bohemians
from flower to petal
Bohemian sky in sepia
collections of flowers on hair
dreams of the walk to San Francisco
where there’ll be lots of loving there
warm rays dance upon the water
graffiti of flowers on yellow vans
mountains majestic peaks reaching high
Published 28th Feb 2024
Author's Note
Thank you Adagio for collaborating with me.
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29th Feb 2024 3:54am
29th Feb 2024 6:26am
1st Mar 2024 6:38pm
Not sure why the word groovy kept popping into my head as I read this. Your collabs with Adagio get smoother and more fluid. You've tapped into each other's potentials, complimenting each other so well.
Superb ink.
Superb ink.
I like that word, Groovy...and the song "Feeling Groovy" by Simon and Garfunkel. Also my take on this was on the hippies who thronged to San Francisco in those days when the flower children lived. And also the Mamas and Papas song.
Thank you for reading Wally, and the kind comments. Adagio has a talent in this field, I just mirror it, as you can see the italics are mine.:)
Thank you for reading Wally, and the kind comments. Adagio has a talent in this field, I just mirror it, as you can see the italics are mine.:)
It's a lovely read. The walk to San Francisco sounds like a very inviting one. There's plenty of sunshine in these verses. Here's to the flower people, yay! 🌻✌😎
2nd Mar 2024 00:41am
Sunny side of yesteryears eh, Billy. Thanks for dropping by and reading.:) Cheers!!
