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Bride
I secret my sunshine away
the cobwebs on my soul catch the light dazzling inside the deep shadows
brooding on thoughts best left undisturbed
I sink into deeper thought
garnering wisdom from philosophers of tragedy
it is errant to think my life is squandered
I was sent here to gain perspective
in my sadness, I reflect on the parables I've learned
the knowledge I've gained while suffering
how would I know love any other way
it is not magic to create a companion
it takes time and patience
sorrow a flavor for the soul
to make temperate and tender
keeping the secrets of hope on my lips
singing in Psalms to the Ages
until my wedding dress is donned
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Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 3:08am
This is really good, Crimson. Really, really. I'm nodding my head as I read it again, in appreciation. Well written!
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Re: Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 3:11am
thank you graciously dearest Styxian I really do work at being a good companion to understand people and the spiritual it takes wisdom and that can only be gained... I'm happy this spoke to you 💕
Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 3:20am
I completely agree
The opening line is awesome.
I secret my sunshine away
Everything after that is so well synced.
Like a lovely unveiling:)
The opening line is awesome.
I secret my sunshine away
Everything after that is so well synced.
Like a lovely unveiling:)
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Re: Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 3:54am
hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously lady for such a lovely comment 💕
Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 4:55am
The Psalms of ages. Now there's some magic.
Beautiful.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Beautiful.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 5:02am
hello beautiful Kitty good evening thank you most graciously I deeply appreciate your visits 💕
Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 8:44am
The image of light dazzling upon the cobwebs of the soul - awesome.
The poem was magical!
The poem was magical!
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Re: Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 11:23pm
Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 10:30am
So serene is your rendition of sentiments and thoughts! You carry the soul where you are..
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Re: Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 11:23pm
Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 11:55am
This was a deep, magical experience to read. Nicely executed Crimsin.
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24th Feb 2024 11:24pm
Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 11:17pm
An amazing emotional feel to this write once again, crimsin. I don't know why I should be so surprised. I guess I'm only surprised at your consistency of delivery but I shouldn't be. Regarding your keeping of secrets where hope resides, I only hope it's a matter of time until you walk into the sun again like I know you can. :-)
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Re: Re. Bride
24th Feb 2024 11:26pm
hello dearest Billy thank you graciously as for walking in the sun again I've burned for being me too many times people do not like me it's been that way since childhood I am disliked. I have come to accept it and don't really try anymore to please people there is just something about me...you made me smile anyway 💕
Re. Bride
27th Feb 2024 8:04am
Loved how faith plays such an integral part of this piece.
Well penned crim.
Well penned crim.
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Re: Re. Bride
27th Feb 2024 3:49pm
thank you dearest Wally some people would think I have no faith but I do have great faith however it is different as is it with everyone unique 💕