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Intent
Strange thoughts overwelm me
I feel as though im evil
I have intent to kill
I feel like a fire
Overwhelmed by hate
I dont know why
My heart it aches as i kill
I cut 999 times
I have one knife in one hand and the victoms heart in the other
Blood runs down my cheeks like tears
My eyes are blood red
There are white roses on the ground
Drenced in blood...so red
I feel as though im evil
I have intent to kill
I feel like a fire
Overwhelmed by hate
I dont know why
My heart it aches as i kill
I cut 999 times
I have one knife in one hand and the victoms heart in the other
Blood runs down my cheeks like tears
My eyes are blood red
There are white roses on the ground
Drenced in blood...so red
Published 2nd May 2012
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2nd May 2012 2:22am
Anonymous
2nd May 2012 2:25am
If this is a personal poem...I would first say that it is a good poem and then I would advise you to seek help....There is so much anger pent up in you against the world and against yourself...that these emotions bleed out into your poem
The talent cannot live if you want to die
You, however have taken a good step by writing down how you feel...as this is therapeutic whether you keep a journal, write a short story or write poetry.
Welcome to DUP New Member
Hope things go well for you
Kitty
The talent cannot live if you want to die
You, however have taken a good step by writing down how you feel...as this is therapeutic whether you keep a journal, write a short story or write poetry.
Welcome to DUP New Member
Hope things go well for you
Kitty
2nd May 2012 2:45pm
