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audience participation
you're the silent type
...an observer
speaking only when it matters
and I've gotta tell you...
your style of articulation is the perfect lubrication
providing the sweetest glide
into my highly sensitized cortex
sweeping me into a sensual vortex
and I ache
...to discover the true depth of your keen poetic penetration
as you claim space
...inch by inch...
until the sensation leaves me weak
and slickened walls begin to squeeze
you've got me rising on each verb
sinking with each noun
your rhythm moving me
inside out & upside down
keep it up...
igniting every zone
(a few I hadn't even known)
but don't worry...
...I know you...
how your tempo keeps you rolling
living wholly in the moment
I get it
it's cool
that's the way I move too
so hit me with the fiery side of your tongue
stimulate my lusty cerebellum
take your time
we've got all night
with your finesse & well deserved confidence
(let's not forget my eagerness)
I'm in for one helluva ride
I want to experience every minute
bend me to your will
pound every point home
don't ease up
until the last syllable uttered
leaves me limp
and bonelessly satisfied
Sometimes the poet(ess) moves you into their seduction chamber with their quill & you're left gasping from the experience...
Pulling her out of the archives & letting her breathe sunlight again...
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