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Transference
You said vibrate for me
so that you may come inside;
to take a look inside
of my mind
so watch your step,
i’m sorry it’s a mess in here
let’s put the blame on this past year
it’s been a stress on my mental
i’ve been holding grudges
i’ve been resentful
because of the dismissal
of my feelings
my energy has been reeling
reeking of the color red
so much shit, left unsaid
that you might think twice
before taking me to bed
because transference is real
so unless you were sent to heal
me
you will never feel
me
because this girl
this version of myself
is not the, real
me
this world has hardened my exterior
it has beaten me down
till i was black and blue
and then there was you…
my soul called out to yours,
and did so, so blindly…
i began to wonder, if you would ever find me
but mind detects mind
we are one of a kind,
you and I,
I and you..
you wasted no time,
putting your cape on
to come and save me;
mending me back together
before you laid me,
down…
it’s so real, this exchange of energies;
transference
the feeling is similar to
no other than
electromagnetic currents
feeling myself come alive again
as you sink, swim, and dive in;
to the uncharted waters of my
darkest abyss
i’ve realized there is no better
feeling than this
all the things i’ve missed
come flooding back to memory
love and warmth
kick out the misery
that i was drowning in
for so fucking long
i was so fucking alone
but now, in you i have a home…
and it’s all because you kissed my soul.
- Poetic Gawdess
so that you may come inside;
to take a look inside
of my mind
so watch your step,
i’m sorry it’s a mess in here
let’s put the blame on this past year
it’s been a stress on my mental
i’ve been holding grudges
i’ve been resentful
because of the dismissal
of my feelings
my energy has been reeling
reeking of the color red
so much shit, left unsaid
that you might think twice
before taking me to bed
because transference is real
so unless you were sent to heal
me
you will never feel
me
because this girl
this version of myself
is not the, real
me
this world has hardened my exterior
it has beaten me down
till i was black and blue
and then there was you…
my soul called out to yours,
and did so, so blindly…
i began to wonder, if you would ever find me
but mind detects mind
we are one of a kind,
you and I,
I and you..
you wasted no time,
putting your cape on
to come and save me;
mending me back together
before you laid me,
down…
it’s so real, this exchange of energies;
transference
the feeling is similar to
no other than
electromagnetic currents
feeling myself come alive again
as you sink, swim, and dive in;
to the uncharted waters of my
darkest abyss
i’ve realized there is no better
feeling than this
all the things i’ve missed
come flooding back to memory
love and warmth
kick out the misery
that i was drowning in
for so fucking long
i was so fucking alone
but now, in you i have a home…
and it’s all because you kissed my soul.
- Poetic Gawdess
Published 20th Feb 2024
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20th Feb 2024 3:38am
20th Feb 2024 3:59am
20th Feb 2024 6:28am
Adoring write from the person who find themselves loved again. Favourite chunk:
you wasted no time,
putting your cape on
to come and save me;
mending me back together
before you laid me,
down…
it’s so real, this exchange of energies;
transference
the feeling is similar to
no other than
electromagnetic currents
feeling myself come alive again
as you sink, swim, and dive in;
to the uncharted waters of my
darkest abyss
i’ve realized there is no better
feeling than this
all the things i’ve missed
come flooding back to memory
love and warmth
kick out the misery
that i was drowning in
you wasted no time,
putting your cape on
to come and save me;
mending me back together
before you laid me,
down…
it’s so real, this exchange of energies;
transference
the feeling is similar to
no other than
electromagnetic currents
feeling myself come alive again
as you sink, swim, and dive in;
to the uncharted waters of my
darkest abyss
i’ve realized there is no better
feeling than this
all the things i’ve missed
come flooding back to memory
love and warmth
kick out the misery
that i was drowning in
29th Feb 2024 00:15am
First, the title is mystical and gives an in-depth analysis either from scientific approach or from a religious interpretation........
While the poem is very well spinning around the main idea of being one thing, one unity parted in two...
Thanks for sharing your poem..
man and woman are two sides of the same coin, so no wonder if they seek each other being at their own back living....
While the poem is very well spinning around the main idea of being one thing, one unity parted in two...
Thanks for sharing your poem..
man and woman are two sides of the same coin, so no wonder if they seek each other being at their own back living....
10th Jun 2024 7:04am
