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I'm going to need a flak jacket
Writing porn doesn't make you unique
it doesn't make you sexy or a freak
it seems sad, crude, and cliché
but that's my opinion for the day
it doesn't make you sexy or a freak
it seems sad, crude, and cliché
but that's my opinion for the day
Published 17th Feb 2024
Author's Note
Yep. Gonna need a flak jacket for this one.
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17th Feb 2024 7:23pm
17th Feb 2024 7:32pm
17th Feb 2024 7:34pm
17th Feb 2024 8:47pm
Damn it! Just about to write some filthy prose then read your piece. Totally deflated! in many ways.
Better put my gimp suit back in its chest. Took me an hour to squeeze into it. I better return that sheep to my neighbours field.
And I better un-clamp that anal rectifier from the hoover ( amazon £21.99.)
Wholeheartedly agree with you!
Dan
Better put my gimp suit back in its chest. Took me an hour to squeeze into it. I better return that sheep to my neighbours field.
And I better un-clamp that anal rectifier from the hoover ( amazon £21.99.)
Wholeheartedly agree with you!
Dan
17th Feb 2024 9:18pm
18th Feb 2024 9:38pm
17th Feb 2024 9:05pm
As I celebrate the Anacreontic core of all poetry, vulgar or not, I have wondered as well about the folks who never branch out into other topics to decorate with their verse.
The phenomenon does indeed reveal a hint about the interdisciplinarity status of their erudition.
The phenomenon does indeed reveal a hint about the interdisciplinarity status of their erudition.
17th Feb 2024 9:19pm
19th Feb 2024 00:22am
Dear J,
I appreciated your point of view in this write. When there is elegance and class in a suggestive poem there is a certain draw. When it’s just graphic for the sake of vulgarity…it’s lost on me.
I had a giggle at your need for a flak jacket. H🌷
I appreciated your point of view in this write. When there is elegance and class in a suggestive poem there is a certain draw. When it’s just graphic for the sake of vulgarity…it’s lost on me.
I had a giggle at your need for a flak jacket. H🌷
