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Melting Into One
In the candid moonlight, beneath the starry sky,
I feel your body close, touching mine.
The beating heart resonates within my being,
Melting in you, my existence shall shine.
So much emotion, I'm unsure how it grows,
Yet the butterfly inside me makes me shiver.
I feel your breath on mine as we softly meld,
For my mouth whispers, I am yours forever.
I feel your body close, touching mine.
The beating heart resonates within my being,
Melting in you, my existence shall shine.
So much emotion, I'm unsure how it grows,
Yet the butterfly inside me makes me shiver.
I feel your breath on mine as we softly meld,
For my mouth whispers, I am yours forever.
Published 16th Feb 2024
Author's Note
"Melting Into One" is a poetic exploration of the profound and intimate moments shared between two individuals under the enchanting embrace of moonlight and stars. The verses seek to convey the depth of emotions, from the resonating heartbeat to the mysterious growth of feelings. The metaphorical imagery of melting into the other person signifies a union and shared existence, while the presence of a butterfly within captures the delicate and shivering nature of love. This poem celebrates the beauty of connection and expresses a timeless commitment, symbolized by the whispered declaration of eternal belonging. May these verses resonate with the readers and evoke the timeless essence of love and unity.
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16th Feb 2024 9:54am
Dear PD,
I enjoyed the romance and intimacy of this piece. You lead the reader without graphics and let them create their own scenarios. Great writing, lovely piece. H🌷
I enjoyed the romance and intimacy of this piece. You lead the reader without graphics and let them create their own scenarios. Great writing, lovely piece. H🌷
