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ice skater
the cold winds
kissed her cheeks,
giving her the illusion
of blushing,
her silent figure
traveled
over the ice
for hours,
the music played
softly for her
in sweet
hushed tones,
she refused
to relinquish
her dance, as
the approving moon
watched over her.
kissed her cheeks,
giving her the illusion
of blushing,
her silent figure
traveled
over the ice
for hours,
the music played
softly for her
in sweet
hushed tones,
she refused
to relinquish
her dance, as
the approving moon
watched over her.
Published 13th Feb 2024
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13th Feb 2024 5:39am
That's what I think of as being in the zone. I want to be that skater. You may have meant this all figuratively, but, whatever, it's a great write.
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 3:48pm
You brought her to life before our very eyes. Sweeping across the icy expanse beautifully by your quill
13th Feb 2024 11:18pm
