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A Piece of Heaven
Imagine a dimension of existence
where everyone loves without snare
the feeling is so pure and fine
every moment seems divine
blissfully nestled heart sings
peace and happiness endlessly rings
no hatred, no crime, no vice
no jealousy, no demands, no sad demise
is that how heaven is to be
pure ecstasy with no harm or pain to see
only endless pure white light
smearing love with its endless might.....
where everyone loves without snare
the feeling is so pure and fine
every moment seems divine
blissfully nestled heart sings
peace and happiness endlessly rings
no hatred, no crime, no vice
no jealousy, no demands, no sad demise
is that how heaven is to be
pure ecstasy with no harm or pain to see
only endless pure white light
smearing love with its endless might.....
Published 12th Feb 2024
Author's Note
May "A Piece of Heaven" be not just a collection of verses but a brief respite—a sanctuary of words that sparks contemplation on the nature of love, bliss, and the utopian visions that linger in the corners of our imagination.
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13th Feb 2024 10:09am
I really liked this, cause I also thought like what if there was no hate. What if adam and even didn't commit the sin of eating the forbidding fruit?
What if the world would just be happy and what would the future now look if history went different? I also think there wouldn't be haunted places either. Cause it be a different mind and many wouldn't be even stuck in between worlds.
I love this and it's a wonder poem to imagine if things were different then now. Keep it up hun.
What if the world would just be happy and what would the future now look if history went different? I also think there wouldn't be haunted places either. Cause it be a different mind and many wouldn't be even stuck in between worlds.
I love this and it's a wonder poem to imagine if things were different then now. Keep it up hun.
13th Feb 2024 11:15am
