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'Dun Make Me Pop 1 In Yo Ass.....'
This piece was inspired this morning by the young lady who morphed this picture and posted in a group of mine on FB.. and stated..
'Dun Make Me Pop 1 In Yo Ass.....'
lol.. i jus had to participate.. ;^)
she walked up in the club and was like..
'who is you nicca?'
he replied..
'im one of a kind.. and hooks bitches like you all the time..'
she grew a smirk and thought to herself..
'this soft ass nicca aint know..
i peep'd his raggedy ass suit and three year old snake boots when i hit the door'..
thinking further she like..
'it makes since.. torn down nicca wit two broke down bitches try'n to front on me.. he ain't know i packs this 44. should rob his punk ass and clown these crack hoes..'
then she open'd her mouth to speak to the nicca..
'is that ri?.. then buy this new bitch a drink.. then maybe you can show me the town.. im new here you pimp ass nicca..'
8^/ Red.. lol.. jus remember Lilx Mamax.. have da nicca open the safe before you kill um..
TrueGritt.. bang out!
'Dun Make Me Pop 1 In Yo Ass.....'
lol.. i jus had to participate.. ;^)
she walked up in the club and was like..
'who is you nicca?'
he replied..
'im one of a kind.. and hooks bitches like you all the time..'
she grew a smirk and thought to herself..
'this soft ass nicca aint know..
i peep'd his raggedy ass suit and three year old snake boots when i hit the door'..
thinking further she like..
'it makes since.. torn down nicca wit two broke down bitches try'n to front on me.. he ain't know i packs this 44. should rob his punk ass and clown these crack hoes..'
then she open'd her mouth to speak to the nicca..
'is that ri?.. then buy this new bitch a drink.. then maybe you can show me the town.. im new here you pimp ass nicca..'
8^/ Red.. lol.. jus remember Lilx Mamax.. have da nicca open the safe before you kill um..
TrueGritt.. bang out!
Published 1st May 2012
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Anonymous
1st May 2012 6:11pm
Yo Bro. Sounds like you got the start of a decent gangsta novel here. You know I love doing the translation of this gangsta talk, it's so pleasing how it makes the mind fill in the gaps and 'hear' the dialogue. This is where your real strength lies for me. Have to say, though, it's not a poem to my way of thinking, not even a proper anecdote as it stands, since there's no story, just the beginning of one. Not that it has to be for you to post it here of course.
I reckon 'Poppin 1 in yo ass' seems to leave room for a little poetic conceit/double entendre - but looking at the pic you have here I'm reminded of a very old joke.
Q. How'd you know your woman's been hitting the steroids too hard?
A. You come home from work one night, she drags you upstairs, throws you on the bed and sticks her clit up your ass.
If that's the kinda women you messin' with, Bro ..... Respec !!! Redzzz
I reckon 'Poppin 1 in yo ass' seems to leave room for a little poetic conceit/double entendre - but looking at the pic you have here I'm reminded of a very old joke.
Q. How'd you know your woman's been hitting the steroids too hard?
A. You come home from work one night, she drags you upstairs, throws you on the bed and sticks her clit up your ass.
If that's the kinda women you messin' with, Bro ..... Respec !!! Redzzz
2nd May 2012 2:45pm
...my brother you are hilarious.. and the route of a joke being funny is to be able the identify a little bit of truth in it.. hahahahahaha... that being said.. this sexy toned up gal pulling a man up some stairs and sticking her clit in his ass is incredibly funny.. LMAO.. and as fine as she is im sure a few fellas would be takers.. hoping she nice enough to let them return the favor.. SMDH..
besides that i just sketched out real quick what the picture said to me at the time.. it was truly the her line plus the pict.. i couldn't help myself.. you know i love some gangsta shii.. >;^)
hollon.. im just reading your last line.. hahahahahaahahahah.. such an asshole.. maybe you came across one of these fine ass Amazonian type.. and liked it... lololololololol.. and if that's the case.. much Respect to you.. 8^O
iight.. thanks for checking it out and sharing your well place joke, Big Bro.. 8^/ Reddzz
besides that i just sketched out real quick what the picture said to me at the time.. it was truly the her line plus the pict.. i couldn't help myself.. you know i love some gangsta shii.. >;^)
hollon.. im just reading your last line.. hahahahahaahahahah.. such an asshole.. maybe you came across one of these fine ass Amazonian type.. and liked it... lololololololol.. and if that's the case.. much Respect to you.. 8^O
iight.. thanks for checking it out and sharing your well place joke, Big Bro.. 8^/ Reddzz
3rd May 2012 6:57pm
3rd May 2012 7:27pm
...don know any otha way to do it.. y they call me RedHot.. lmao.. nah.. tyvm Meeah..
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...thanks for stopping by Meeah and do cuuuum again.. 8^/ Red..
...follow craftsman and craftswomen plz receive with open arms the DU's newest and very very talented member Meeah.. look out for her work.. she Hawt..
...thanks for stopping by Meeah and do cuuuum again.. 8^/ Red..
