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Is it any wonder
Everyone is depressed
Wages don't cover our living
Discipline has disimished
The world is taking and not giving
Yet we ask why our sky is full of thunder
Well is it any wonder
People are so rude
Respect has long since gone
Morals have disappeared
And values are none
Yet we ask why we feel so down and under
Well is it any wonder
Wages don't cover our living
Discipline has disimished
The world is taking and not giving
Yet we ask why our sky is full of thunder
Well is it any wonder
People are so rude
Respect has long since gone
Morals have disappeared
And values are none
Yet we ask why we feel so down and under
Well is it any wonder
Published 9th Feb 2024
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9th Feb 2024 11:42pm
I really liked the way your poem fairly pinpoints the troubles of today with a strong wordplay. Keep up the good work, congratulations.
16th Feb 2024 7:40pm
10th Feb 2024 1:25am
Dear C,
Bravo to you for expressing this truth. I realize the world has always been in dire straights but these days it feels down right apocalyptic. Excellent piece. H🌷
Bravo to you for expressing this truth. I realize the world has always been in dire straights but these days it feels down right apocalyptic. Excellent piece. H🌷
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