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En-lightening
Turbulence throbbed sans repentance
Hurricanes assembled e-motions
Undercurrents conspired
Needling the edge of man's hood
Destined...divined in his
Erected edifice
Resolute...rigid........ready for the
Storm of her Sex crashing in
Thunderous moods
Restless is her Sea...ravenous
Unchained...unfiltered...unfettered`
Causalty be damned as
Knowledge reaps in a tsunami of waves
Hurricanes assembled e-motions
Undercurrents conspired
Needling the edge of man's hood
Destined...divined in his
Erected edifice
Resolute...rigid........ready for the
Storm of her Sex crashing in
Thunderous moods
Restless is her Sea...ravenous
Unchained...unfiltered...unfettered`
Causalty be damned as
Knowledge reaps in a tsunami of waves
Published 2nd Feb 2024
Author's Note
My entry for the Thunder struck comp
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2nd Feb 2024 4:39pm
2nd Feb 2024 4:56pm
Superbly constructed acrostic, dear Naj.
You've cleverly constructed this piece using the power of nature to call forth an impressive emotional impact, accentuating a truly seductive feel. a winner in the making, I predict!
Good luck
🌹💙
Lovely to see you.
-B
You've cleverly constructed this piece using the power of nature to call forth an impressive emotional impact, accentuating a truly seductive feel. a winner in the making, I predict!
Good luck
🌹💙
Lovely to see you.
-B
2nd Feb 2024 6:09pm
2nd Feb 2024 8:19pm
Your poetic finesse has always felt like silken water cascading upon the mind, my Hebrew King. A poet in my eyes, who have not lessened his poetic swag through the ages of time, and this gem just proves that fact.
On that uplifting whisper, have a great Friday, and a prosperous weekend, in addition, best wishes regarding the competition.
SKC🌹
On that uplifting whisper, have a great Friday, and a prosperous weekend, in addition, best wishes regarding the competition.
SKC🌹
3rd Feb 2024 1:48pm
3rd Feb 2024 6:55pm
This was so smooth it’s hard to believe
A storm was raging… lol super slick Acrostic n wish you all the best in the comp…Although it’s a winner
to me! 👍🏿✌🏾🤓
A storm was raging… lol super slick Acrostic n wish you all the best in the comp…Although it’s a winner
to me! 👍🏿✌🏾🤓
4th Feb 2024 11:39am
4th Feb 2024 3:45pm
