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Car Ride

I picked you up today  
after getting off work on this beautiful day  
I drove you to our spot  
your tongue hanging out like you were hot  
I looked over and a tear came to my eye  
you looked at me as if to ask why  
I wanted to tell you our last ride was soon  
maybe September maybe the end of June  
I had so much I wanted to say  
but all I could manage was "I love you, okay?"  
you sat there enjoying the incoming breeze  
as my pain began to ease  
I know you love me too  
I'm your papa and you're my Jenny roo  
so I know when the time does arrive  
our car ride memories will keep me alive  
and though my heart aches to let you go  
the love we shared will forever glow.
Written by LongTubiFree (JustinSizemore)
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Author's Note
Sometimes the beginning of the end hurts the most. For Jenny....
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