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Crater Lake
Meet me at
the sun polished Crater Lake.
In such lavish light,
the fir, pine and hemlock,
are warmly baked.
Woozy trees, drunk on the beauty.
Inebriated with a
moment of the stolen still.
These stoic bark creatures flaunt
pristine emerald and jade frill.
The long desired water
possess's the purest hue.
The deep cobalt blue,
lazily yet hypnotically,
extends an invitation to you.
The lake's shimmered secrets
hold the most ancient truths.
The charcoal mountainous flank
boast's of thousands of years old.
Stirs a riveting lazy pleasure
in my soul's craters.
the sun polished Crater Lake.
In such lavish light,
the fir, pine and hemlock,
are warmly baked.
Woozy trees, drunk on the beauty.
Inebriated with a
moment of the stolen still.
These stoic bark creatures flaunt
pristine emerald and jade frill.
The long desired water
possess's the purest hue.
The deep cobalt blue,
lazily yet hypnotically,
extends an invitation to you.
The lake's shimmered secrets
hold the most ancient truths.
The charcoal mountainous flank
boast's of thousands of years old.
Stirs a riveting lazy pleasure
in my soul's craters.
Published 31st Jan 2024
Author's Note
I saw a gorgeous picture of Crater Lake National Park.
Never been there
My brother has.
Never been there
My brother has.
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
31st Jan 2024 7:31pm
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31st Jan 2024 7:50pm
31st Jan 2024 7:33pm
Much Oregonian landscape still shows the volcanic scars of it's geological birth.
Definitely worth a visit for nature lovers:)
Definitely worth a visit for nature lovers:)
31st Jan 2024 7:51pm
31st Jan 2024 7:36pm
Hello Debbie.
Beautiful description describing this lake. A vision that you captured really well in your poem. Nicely done!!
Beautiful description describing this lake. A vision that you captured really well in your poem. Nicely done!!
31st Jan 2024 7:52pm
Thank you. The photograph was so striking I could not grasp that was reality, lol. It deserved a poem.
Thanks for nice comments!
Thanks for nice comments!
31st Jan 2024 7:58pm
31st Jan 2024 8:04pm
31st Jan 2024 8:16pm
'Tis a lovely tribute to Crater Lake. You have incorporated both the beauty & mystery of it superbly. Not only that... you have made it sound sooo inviting! 😊
31st Jan 2024 8:25pm
31st Jan 2024 8:28pm
Anonymous
1st Feb 2024 4:11pm
Love the image of woozy trees drunk on the moment!
1st Feb 2024 5:49pm
1st Feb 2024 6:22pm
23rd Feb 2024 3:08am
This is expressed very well. I can sense that this is where your heart is - in places like this. It's not difficult to tell that you love nature. The language and depiction - where do I begin? This is solid the whole way through, before and after various transitions changing. I like how you described the colors and trees, especially. I also detect a potential double entendre in "moment of stolen still." Are you implying the trees steal your attention into silence, or the good times of their intoxication? Ha-ha, I think you're a "natural" at writing, in that it just comes to you, and you let it flow, to where such things (double entendre) come second hand. Anyway, overall, great job. Thanks for sharing.
23rd Feb 2024 10:17am
Well hello.
I think a moment of stolen still means I stole the ecstatic still
of the trees, I think, lol
I really appreciate your feedback.
If I sit down to write about nature, it just flows like crazy,
out of me. Yes it is where my heart lies. I've never been there,
I described a stunning picture I saw, but my brother has been there.
Thx for stopping bye!!!
I think a moment of stolen still means I stole the ecstatic still
of the trees, I think, lol
I really appreciate your feedback.
If I sit down to write about nature, it just flows like crazy,
out of me. Yes it is where my heart lies. I've never been there,
I described a stunning picture I saw, but my brother has been there.
Thx for stopping bye!!!
