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simplistically implicit
Velvet tease
Wordless pleas
Fluid embrace
Quicken pace
Merciless take
Desperate ache
Blissful pain
Submission gain
Climax won
She's done
Wordless pleas
Fluid embrace
Quicken pace
Merciless take
Desperate ache
Blissful pain
Submission gain
Climax won
She's done
Published 31st Jan 2024
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31st Jan 2024 6:28pm
31st Jan 2024 11:27pm
1st Feb 2024 00:26am
1st Feb 2024 1:37am
Thank you! I have been unable to write for years. This took me by surprise and just sort of spilled out while I was doodling the other night. I was actually quite uncertain and nervous about sharing it. I'm glad I did.
1st Feb 2024 10:00am
Hoi hoi
I’m glad you did.
Powerful and compact write.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus
I’m glad you did.
Powerful and compact write.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus
1st Feb 2024 12:28pm
I'm so happy I did. Trying to reclaim the confidence I had all those years ago and honestly I think it was a great first step. Thank you for reading and for your encouraging words.
