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tender feelings wash over me
I could love you so easily
but I don't want to
little doubts corrupt my feelings
inside me shiver knowing this is real
your kindness leaves me breathless
your sweet crooked smile takes me back
I can't help but smile back
even when I'm pissed at you
gentle emotions sing to me
this is a good guy
I know it's a great thing
that's where the danger lies
you treat me beautiful
I am a stranger to this way of living
is it reality I'm experiencing?
or a delusional disconnect?
where I've placed you on my heart errant
I seek your inner man
I find him charming
you are the man I think you are
but my perception has fibbed before
but not this time
I'll enjoy the moments with you
until they're done
until they're gone
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30th Jan 2024 7:58am
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30th Jan 2024 2:37pm
Living in the moment & knowing it isn't eternal. That's a beautiful honesty. Lovely poem, Brenda
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30th Jan 2024 3:03pm
Hey! Or until they never end?
Smiled all the way! Reminds me of someone I like Specially.
x~
Smiled all the way! Reminds me of someone I like Specially.
x~
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1st Feb 2024 00:57am
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Anonymous
31st Jan 2024 3:56am
Hey Crim, how gracious your heart writes upon the page, enjoy every luving moment shared for sure, the last stanza deeply felt. Luv this, RL for me. Purple luv & hugs 💜
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1st Feb 2024 00:58am
hi beautiful Flower thank you my dear friend... you know love better than most I cherish your thoughts 💕
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16th Feb 2024 5:45pm
Thoroughly enjoyed the flow of this, the honest inner dialogue that goes at first as we keep discovering things in personal relationships and intimacy.
Nicely done crim.
Nicely done crim.
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3rd Sep 2024 1:20am
Hello mine friend... found this on peninnah reading list... very well done, enjoyed readin this very much... take good care, and Up the Irons: Eddie
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