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Haunting Magic
The veiled moon emits
the strangest obscure light.
Silently awakening
the secret world
of my dark delights.
Yet the tide twinkles,
blinding bright,
on the ancient shore
of my mind tonight.
Mysterious memories swirl
that have haunted me before.
As a dark euphoria sedates my core.
In the center of the soul
exists a vaulted door,
where the ghosts of the heart reside.
To go inside exposes
every secret you ache to confide.
Whoever told me there is no magic
lied to my seeking, searching eyes.
The night is silent, can you hear it....
The world's dark veined ecstasies
sustain my sparkling startled spirit...
the strangest obscure light.
Silently awakening
the secret world
of my dark delights.
Yet the tide twinkles,
blinding bright,
on the ancient shore
of my mind tonight.
Mysterious memories swirl
that have haunted me before.
As a dark euphoria sedates my core.
In the center of the soul
exists a vaulted door,
where the ghosts of the heart reside.
To go inside exposes
every secret you ache to confide.
Whoever told me there is no magic
lied to my seeking, searching eyes.
The night is silent, can you hear it....
The world's dark veined ecstasies
sustain my sparkling startled spirit...
Published 29th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Always believe in ✨ magic
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29th Jan 2024 11:47am
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29th Jan 2024 11:55am
WOW. What a poem. So well written and enjoyed the ghost theme here.
29th Jan 2024 12:13pm
Your comment gave me a much needed smile.
I love ghostly, haunting, spooky, lol
The moon was obscured with a strange eery light last night.
I love ghostly, haunting, spooky, lol
The moon was obscured with a strange eery light last night.
29th Jan 2024 12:10pm
29th Jan 2024 12:11pm
29th Jan 2024 12:16pm
Oh yes! The haunting magic of turning on Monday's switch. Hoping the new week brings you a glazed smile.
29th Jan 2024 12:25pm
29th Jan 2024 12:29pm
29th Jan 2024 1:13pm
“A dark euphoria sedates my core”
What?! That is brilliant.
Loved the imagery. As usual, your words just do that, take me to what you see. Thank you💕
What?! That is brilliant.
Loved the imagery. As usual, your words just do that, take me to what you see. Thank you💕
29th Jan 2024 1:39pm
I could go for some nice dark euphoria sedating my core right about now, lol.
It's nice to know my words reach peoples imaginations
Magic day to you girl 💕
It's nice to know my words reach peoples imaginations
Magic day to you girl 💕
29th Jan 2024 5:54pm
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30th Jan 2024 12:01pm
Anonymous
30th Jan 2024 12:54pm
Magic in every line!
30th Jan 2024 12:57pm
19th Feb 2024 2:47am
I'm seeing growth in you as a writer, in this. You bring both the "euphoria" and "suffering" in a full circle of balance, as you weave them together throughout the direction and transition of your poem from beginning to end. How it's expressed at the end really caught my attention. It's like you're squaring the roots, if you will, and taking it to a new level of exponentiation. The brevity you use conceptually builds a new level in itself in the last five lines, where you not only summarize concisely, but add to its backstory with confident expression. Anyway, just some little things I picked up in this. Thanks for sharing. Look forward to hearing from you!
19th Feb 2024 9:53am
Hi! What a nice surprise.
I read everything you wrote
and was stunned, lol - I did that?!!!
I truly appreciate your knowledge of poetry
and all that you share to encourage me.
That does seem to be my driving theme many times - agony vs. ecstasy.
I'm so happy you liked it and many thanks!
- debbie
I read everything you wrote
and was stunned, lol - I did that?!!!
I truly appreciate your knowledge of poetry
and all that you share to encourage me.
That does seem to be my driving theme many times - agony vs. ecstasy.
I'm so happy you liked it and many thanks!
- debbie
