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Quietly
inside my darkness, I shine
A Queen of Destiny
fated to love you
calculated odds in the noise you hear me
defending lust's altercations
you break me
I am broken before you
a Mistress of Nothing
in my storm, you strike me
hating my chaos
but chaotic is love
it is dirty and needy
elegant and wanton
you knew me
I didn't lie to you
filthy little whore speaking expletives to your soul
darkness sparks and I glow
otherworldly I am not to be touched there
greed has his way, still
what do we know?
in the depths touching each other
then withdrawing into the noise once more
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24th Jan 2024 11:54pm
good afternoon dearest poet I thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment...I deeply appreciate your thoughts here 💕
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25th Jan 2024 11:52am
A beautiful poem that touches on a rather poignant truth that sometimes we have to take love where it is, even if its brief moments in time and space. So very well said here.
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26th Jan 2024 3:18am
thank you dearest poet that's it is all in the moment embracing the feelings when they come💕
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25th Jan 2024 2:05pm
I never know which I love more, your tender side, your vicious side, or your dark side. This was really well done, lovely. I respect the way you respect the different aspects of your inner being, your love and desire in new ways.
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26th Jan 2024 3:20am
thank you beautiful Betty for embracing all sides of me because they all speak to who I am some people prefer the generic me I offer the masses...I truly appreciate being accepted for the geniunine me 💕
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