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Free fall
This feels like a free fall, but its never ending.
Falling into the unknown, but never stopping.
This is the feeling I fear; you may not say it out loud,
but I can't help notice you've pushed away.
Have I done something? Have I become a bore?
Am I not intersting anymore? Have you found someone new?
Someone closer to home? Is she prettier than me?
Or are you just as confused as me?
Tell me.
Talk to me.
Don't hold back.
Trust me.
Open your heart to me, I dont'
wanna be the reason you've pushed away.
I'm left here confused, helpless, unsure of what to do.
Thoughts run wild; heart beats fast.
Tell me what to do... I don't wanna lose you,
not now, not since we've only just begun.
Falling into the unknown, but never stopping.
This is the feeling I fear; you may not say it out loud,
but I can't help notice you've pushed away.
Have I done something? Have I become a bore?
Am I not intersting anymore? Have you found someone new?
Someone closer to home? Is she prettier than me?
Or are you just as confused as me?
Tell me.
Talk to me.
Don't hold back.
Trust me.
Open your heart to me, I dont'
wanna be the reason you've pushed away.
I'm left here confused, helpless, unsure of what to do.
Thoughts run wild; heart beats fast.
Tell me what to do... I don't wanna lose you,
not now, not since we've only just begun.
Published 30th Apr 2012
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30th Apr 2012 8:39am
Cant blame gravity for falling in love. However this jolts a memory that I live with everyday. Just when you think that you can't put something into words. You find a great writer that does it for you. Only if this could be true in all of life's questions that you have no answers for. Thank you for this write. I really has helped to know about that fall. Kudos.
3rd May 2012 6:57am
Even with a fall we decide how we react. Do we go with the flow? Try to resist? Brace for an impact? Sometimes things can't be accurately assessed until after the falling is done. Too bad the actualization is never as easy as just speaking the words!
25th Aug 2012 4:55am
Aww this is very sweet and touching in it's honesty.
It is so strange and awkward having to interpret silence. But it is frequently that silence that holds all the answers we seek to the secrets we keep. It's the razor's edge.
It is so strange and awkward having to interpret silence. But it is frequently that silence that holds all the answers we seek to the secrets we keep. It's the razor's edge.
