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Entry #3
does your back ache when you want to get up
and you cant really do anything but lay there
because youre afraid that if you get up you might
fall back down and never know how to get back up
ever again because if the world ends you might be
disappointed with the way things were in your laying
down life and then whatll you do and even if things
were different would you really want to change them
but what if you do change them and then youre not the
same person you thought you were but then everyone
or more no one will even know who you are and then
the only left to do is lie in your bed just like you
always have since that other life or maybe youd just
take the easy way out and kill yourself because thats
the only option which means thats always been the
only option ever, right?
Yeah. I get that way too.
[END TRANSMISSION]
and you cant really do anything but lay there
because youre afraid that if you get up you might
fall back down and never know how to get back up
ever again because if the world ends you might be
disappointed with the way things were in your laying
down life and then whatll you do and even if things
were different would you really want to change them
but what if you do change them and then youre not the
same person you thought you were but then everyone
or more no one will even know who you are and then
the only left to do is lie in your bed just like you
always have since that other life or maybe youd just
take the easy way out and kill yourself because thats
the only option which means thats always been the
only option ever, right?
Yeah. I get that way too.
[END TRANSMISSION]
Published 30th Apr 2012
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30th Apr 2012 7:35am
I was originally thinking that it would be better if less run-on, but after finishing it I think it's excellent as it is. As someone whose entire life has been a laying down life... Preach on, man, for all of us.
Anonymous
- Edited 18th May 2012 3:38pm
17th May 2012 7:36am
13blueyes13 ~ my gf and i just found u under 3 more phony names attacking our best friend. lies, she has not lied to you at all! your world is a lie. you have hep c and u never told her until months after u were together. u have a son who sits there while u do drug deals out of your house, you have very few to no friends due to your lying and drug problem. for a person who feels all of these terrible things about her under your other name 13blueyes13 y dont u take the picture down of you two and the poem u wrote and move on. you ask her over to see you every weekend and u write this shit about her under several fake names. whats wrong with you? the one poem u wrote under this phony name is bs- and u blocked it so no comments can be made. ha.. u know that is very hurtful to her. she has been through hell and u say she is lying. fat chance! she is a survivor and u r not the victim and not the only one with a past. she opened up to u and u do this shit. u r a coward. keep hiding under anonymous names. ass!
22nd May 2012 7:23pm
Um... I don't have a son, and I don't do drugs out of my house. You have the wrong person, I'm sorry.
Anonymous
18th May 2012 3:36pm
Thank you for taking the picture down, now maybe you can move on...
