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Whats Up?
In a profound slumber, I exist,
What unfolds is but a dream,
Moments slip away,
And I merely shimmer in the gleam.
One day, this will all conclude,
I shall awaken then,
To comprehend it entirely,
And at last, say, "What's up?"
What unfolds is but a dream,
Moments slip away,
And I merely shimmer in the gleam.
One day, this will all conclude,
I shall awaken then,
To comprehend it entirely,
And at last, say, "What's up?"
Published 23rd Jan 2024
Author's Note
"What's Up?" explores the realms of dreams, contemplation, and the anticipation of understanding in a state of slumber. The poem delves into the transient nature of moments and the cyclical journey of awakening. The title, "What's Up?" adds an informal and curious touch, inviting readers to join in the exploration of the dreamer's introspective journey. The verses aim to evoke a sense of wonder and contemplation about the mysteries that lie beyond the dreamlike state.
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23rd Jan 2024 4:27am
I like how you have explained your stance on your works of art utilizing your Author's Notes, it gives much credence to the direction of your vison found in the collage of your words.
Enjoy your evening.
Enjoy your evening.
23rd Jan 2024 5:32am
Thank you so much. I want the readers to get a feel of what it is intended for and perhaps read it more than once and enjoy it.
