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Selfish Nature
Selfish nature elevation.
Relish major selling labels?
Quelling wager, well, its nay, sir.
Fellow paydirt, shelling failure.
Tell a hater, "Jealous, player?"
Helping tailor, hello waivers.
Relics wayward, realms of favor.
Bell witch angles, pelting strangers.
Felt in fable, swelling Clayman.
Helpless pacers, hellish anger.
Melon mangled, melted taste buds.
Smelling Steak-Umm's, velum flavors.
Spelling savor, gelling labor.
Felon neighbors dealt the chambers.
Twelve AM for zealous Maker.
El is faithful, dwell with savior.
Relish major selling labels?
Quelling wager, well, its nay, sir.
Fellow paydirt, shelling failure.
Tell a hater, "Jealous, player?"
Helping tailor, hello waivers.
Relics wayward, realms of favor.
Bell witch angles, pelting strangers.
Felt in fable, swelling Clayman.
Helpless pacers, hellish anger.
Melon mangled, melted taste buds.
Smelling Steak-Umm's, velum flavors.
Spelling savor, gelling labor.
Felon neighbors dealt the chambers.
Twelve AM for zealous Maker.
El is faithful, dwell with savior.
Published 22nd Jan 2024
Author's Note
8 bars or stanzas of a word exercise, with a sort of nerdy hip hop theme.
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22nd Jan 2024 10:21am
I liked this a lot. I don't care for selfish people. Your one line about the hater - " jealous player?", I feel like I know that look that goes along with it.
It read very smooth!
It read very smooth!
22nd Jan 2024 3:59pm
Thanks for checking it out. I was tinkering with words, and before I knew it, I had like two and a half stanzas, so I just figured I'd practice and make a writing exercise, heh. Anyway, take care!
22nd Jan 2024 4:42pm
