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Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
my ass
in panties
this small
deserves
what you're
about to do
and lover...
what you won't do
by the time I've
cleaned him from
my body...
so wind my long hair
around your fist,
cup my cheek,
gently help me
to my knees
(s h i v e r s )
and wash
his name
from back
of my
throat
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Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 10:00pm
Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 10:02pm
Welcome to the broken heart line. You've entered REBOUNDS. Also known as The Ho Phase.
Please wear a raincoat, and keep your tray in the upright position at all times.
Enjoy the ride.
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Dec 2024 5:45pm
18th Jan 2024 10:12pm
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 10:14pm
Ah, darling, no.
But I'm willing to sacrifice as many of you as it takes to confirm that with empirical evidence.
(wink)
But I'm willing to sacrifice as many of you as it takes to confirm that with empirical evidence.
(wink)
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 10:23pm
Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 10:25pm
I actually giggled in my chair, because I originally read that as "mouth" and was like... we're getting on the entendre bus already?! YAAAASS! let's go!
Hey. I've got matches.
Just sayin.
Hey. I've got matches.
Just sayin.
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 11:02pm
wowee lovely one... this is great...I feel your intensity...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e_aCcG6SjH4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e_aCcG6SjH4
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 1:01am
Ah, darling, you always feel me. You have a gift for channeling a song for the emotion you get from a poem. Thank you.
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
18th Jan 2024 11:10pm
Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 1:01am
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
Anonymous
18th Jan 2024 11:20pm
You opened this with a spectacular visual & followed through with that vein...pun intended. Whatever it takes to clear out the taste of old, yeah?
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 1:03am
OMG, yes! VEIN PUN! AHAHAHAHAH! First person to make me laugh gets hit on... so... want to sit on my lap and play doctor?
Sorry. Old habits.
I'm fucking dedicated. SO dedicated. It's in here deep. Might take several tries to get it out. BUT I'M DEDICATED!
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate you.
Sorry. Old habits.
I'm fucking dedicated. SO dedicated. It's in here deep. Might take several tries to get it out. BUT I'M DEDICATED!
Thanks for the comment. I appreciate you.
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 1:37am
68 problems with 69 solutions....
You doubled down with aesthetic taste!
Command destruction with a brass knob!
You doubled down with aesthetic taste!
Command destruction with a brass knob!
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 1:43am
I do like to have more solutions than problems!
Any kind of knob, really, brass is irrelevant.
Any kind of knob, really, brass is irrelevant.
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 8:03am
I felt this to the heart...
Or should I say from the throat?
Haha! Wow, you have a way with words that makes me want to bow down to your greatness.
In this poem, he's the one grabbing your hair, but you're actually the one in control. Kinda cool.
<3
Or should I say from the throat?
Haha! Wow, you have a way with words that makes me want to bow down to your greatness.
In this poem, he's the one grabbing your hair, but you're actually the one in control. Kinda cool.
<3
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Jan 2024 9:32pm
Thank you my friend.
Oh hell yeah, I’m in total charge of the sex games. I’m the one with the manuals and game pieces… heh heh heh.
Fuck, when is the woman not in control?! Even when we relinquish control… that’s still control. You violate the fuck out of me in a way that I need. I. Need.
Do a good job, and I’ll let you do it again.
To quote Beyoncé: Who run the world? (Girls)
Thanks again for stopping by!
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
20th Jan 2024 4:58am
Straight to the ego of Man you went
....message authenticated!!
Much respect
Naaj
....message authenticated!!
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
20th Jan 2024 4:59am
RIGHT!
Glad the message is true, and I'll take that respect.
Good to see you around!
Glad the message is true, and I'll take that respect.
Good to see you around!
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
22nd Jan 2024 5:52pm
You blew threw the door with that first stanza & laid it out solid in every word following. You're worth every second of the "loan"...incredible rebound piece!
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
22nd Jan 2024 9:42pm
THANK YOU! I think I am, too!
Yeah, I'm a little viscous when I'm wounded, and all I want to do is be unwounded... whoever, and whatever that takes.
May have to start a rental company. :)
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
22nd Jan 2024 9:41pm
Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
22nd Jan 2024 9:42pm
Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
19th Apr 2024 7:02pm
ok you're clean now... im not.. damn hot hot ... im going to use my pressure washer
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Re: Re. Can I borrow your cock for a quick scrub?
20th Apr 2024 2:00am
OOOooO, a pressure washer? I have a shower head that keeps things toe-curlingly clean, but I could level that shit up!