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A Sweet Future
Shatter my heart.
It bleeds a shimmer.
Break open my thoughts.
Out spills glitter.
Now a darkling sparkling.
The past is bitter,
that I've become an onyx butterfly.
Being unloved by you,
was my chrysalis,
to shed layers of denial.
People are preachers.
Yet both love and pain are the
true savage teachers.
If you master blind hope,
you will surely cope.
I spit out the past,
for a sweet future.
It bleeds a shimmer.
Break open my thoughts.
Out spills glitter.
Now a darkling sparkling.
The past is bitter,
that I've become an onyx butterfly.
Being unloved by you,
was my chrysalis,
to shed layers of denial.
People are preachers.
Yet both love and pain are the
true savage teachers.
If you master blind hope,
you will surely cope.
I spit out the past,
for a sweet future.
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Re. A Sweet Future
12th Jan 2024 2:13am
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12th Jan 2024 2:21am
The only way out is through - Robert Frost
Through each excruciation of my current circumstances, I do feeling like I'm growing & learning
Through each excruciation of my current circumstances, I do feeling like I'm growing & learning
Re. A Sweet Future
12th Jan 2024 4:51am
I love this!!
A tribute to all the beautiful onyx butterflies out there:)
It's also one of my favorite stones.
Great for protection and attracts good luck!
Truly enjoyed the read:)
A tribute to all the beautiful onyx butterflies out there:)
It's also one of my favorite stones.
Great for protection and attracts good luck!
Truly enjoyed the read:)
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12th Jan 2024 9:19am
Thank you so much. If I were a butterfly, I'd want to be mostly black. Lol I have heard onyx is a protective stone. I'm so happy you liked the poem.
Re. A Sweet Future
12th Jan 2024 9:50am
Yes,
your words of wisdom are layed out as mysterious, and beautiful as the fluttering of a butterfly.
What a magical sight.
<3
your words of wisdom are layed out as mysterious, and beautiful as the fluttering of a butterfly.
What a magical sight.
<3
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12th Jan 2024 9:55am
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12th Jan 2024 9:58am
Only inspired by your sweet work!
I'm glad to have!
Hope your rest of the day is as well!
<3
I'm glad to have!
Hope your rest of the day is as well!
<3
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12th Jan 2024 10:05am
Re. A Sweet Future
12th Jan 2024 11:23am
“Both love and pain age the true savage teachers”
Truth!
Have I told you lately how much I adore opening my updates and seeing that you’ve posted?
Go chase yourself a big cup of sunshine today, my friend.
Truth!
Have I told you lately how much I adore opening my updates and seeing that you’ve posted?
Go chase yourself a big cup of sunshine today, my friend.
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12th Jan 2024 11:30am
Aww, thank u so much. I get excited to see yours too. You are full of surprises, good ones.
You go seize the day too 💜
You go seize the day too 💜
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12th Jan 2024 11:31am
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12th Jan 2024 11:34am
Thank you very much, I'm so grateful for my very talented friends that support me. I don't think people realize, it keeps me going thru trying times
Re. A Sweet Future
12th Jan 2024 12:42pm
This feels of shaking off the past & welcoming in the new. I love how you made the past seem more than it was...glitter vs gold, for instance. Very nicely done!
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12th Jan 2024 1:15pm
It's is a poem of shaking of the past.
Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Thank you so much for your kind comments.