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Who Am I
I gaze into the mirror,
I contemplate the sky.
Looking down the meadow,
Where blooming flowers lie.
I stroll through life-filled streets,
Feeling the seasons, loving dear ones.
I do, I act, I move,
Yet, who am I when the day is done?
Is it just this body, or something more?
In this endless quest, I ponder,
Relevance of self or just zest,
A wondering soul in a boundless yonder.
I contemplate the sky.
Looking down the meadow,
Where blooming flowers lie.
I stroll through life-filled streets,
Feeling the seasons, loving dear ones.
I do, I act, I move,
Yet, who am I when the day is done?
Is it just this body, or something more?
In this endless quest, I ponder,
Relevance of self or just zest,
A wondering soul in a boundless yonder.
Published 11th Jan 2024
Author's Note
In "Who Am I," I invite you to join me on a reflective journey through the meadows of introspection. This piece explores the timeless question of identity and the intricate dance between self-awareness and the external world. As we navigate the streets filled with life and seasons, let's ponder together the essence of existence and the curious quest for understanding the 'I' within. May these verses resonate with your own contemplations and stir the echoes of self-discovery.
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11th Jan 2024 5:46am
A question I used to wonder myself for years. I am thankful to be past that journey. It was probably the most difficult of my life to be able to answer the "identity" question which plagues all of us in young adulthood and on.
13th Jan 2024 10:06am
11th Jan 2024 8:26am
One thing I do everyday, is contemplate the sky.
Loved your message.
Killer last line
Loved your message.
Killer last line
13th Jan 2024 10:06am
11th Jan 2024 12:50pm
Grand Rising my poet,
You have a theological way of expressing yourself quite well, and this self reflection does resonate a path of self-discovery, they say a man lives twice as a child and once as a man, meaning from infancy to adulthood, back to becoming infantile in his golden years of life.
Today is Thursday, therefore, I hope you enjoy it to the fullest.
You have a theological way of expressing yourself quite well, and this self reflection does resonate a path of self-discovery, they say a man lives twice as a child and once as a man, meaning from infancy to adulthood, back to becoming infantile in his golden years of life.
Today is Thursday, therefore, I hope you enjoy it to the fullest.
13th Jan 2024 10:06am
13th Jan 2024 3:06pm
11th Jan 2024 12:55pm
The Psyche is the most ambiguous core in the human being, know yourself, that is the question..
Challenge yourself that is the ambition.
stay happy.always
Challenge yourself that is the ambition.
stay happy.always
13th Jan 2024 10:07am
